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Hey,this is simply beautiful......!!!!! Its better than most of your earlier poems.....
@manu:thanks yaar...
fantastic!!! the good thing about an acro is that the heading should be felt in the entire poem. and you did complete justice to this acrostic.with time you can fix the syllable count and try more challenging acros :)
@FL: thanks.. i will sure try improving on it.. m loving this new style.. few words but more meaning..n yeah do keep telling me wat i need to do to make it better
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Hey,this is simply beautiful......!!!!! Its better than most of your earlier poems.....
@manu:thanks yaar...
fantastic!!! the good thing about an acro is that the heading should be felt in the entire poem. and you did complete justice to this acrostic.
with time you can fix the syllable count and try more challenging acros :)
@FL: thanks.. i will sure try improving on it.. m loving this new style.. few words but more meaning..n yeah do keep telling me wat i need to do to make it better
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